I am disapointed,
in friends,
in enemies,
in poor,
in rich,
in past,
and even in present,
I am disapointed,
in social,
in anti social,
in cast ,
and even in this country,
I am disapointed,
in classed ,
and in outclassed,
I am disapointed ,
in fame money and treasures,
i am disapointed,
in heart,
mind,
and soul,
I am disapointed in life ,
disapointment is all i get from everywhere,
Common all just FU*K this disapointment up,
and get lost in our lives in a selfish way,
as cruades are disguise who take money for lives.
in friends,
in enemies,
in poor,
in rich,
in past,
and even in present,
I am disapointed,
in social,
in anti social,
in cast ,
and even in this country,
I am disapointed,
in classed ,
and in outclassed,
I am disapointed ,
in fame money and treasures,
i am disapointed,
in heart,
mind,
and soul,
I am disapointed in life ,
disapointment is all i get from everywhere,
Common all just FU*K this disapointment up,
and get lost in our lives in a selfish way,
as cruades are disguise who take money for lives.
8 comments:
Good when one's very pissed off and nothing decent comes to mind.
HeHeHe....
fuck the dissapointed piece of fuckin awsome shit...
good goin dude...
try to be more regular....
nicely expressed ...hang in there, better times will come.
ya i guess better times have jst started to come i went to watch GHAJNI and lost my cell wow nice times have atlast come thatnx god and thanx lucifer......
ha ha ha
Hi I liked this poem until the end. I think you need to work on just that one part to make the readers feel it more... Good job!
Good Writing!!!
ya surely i'll definately work on that one part for sure and thanks for the advice....
i am glad atlast i can see some comments coming wow what a new year present....
thanks LUCIFER>>>>>ANGEL OF LIGHT BUT LIVING IN HELL Hmmmm....
better do something about it if you are SO disappointed :) write a more cribbier poem maybe ;)
and that is a wicked cool pic in the header man. We like!
oh and if you go to fonts and colors section of the setting and make the header borders the same color of the background then the pic will look much better.
Cheers!
and a very happy new year :)
N
same to u dude happy new year and all thanks to lucifer that i was able to find that cool pic over there on google and about your suggestion think it as done till then bye... take care dude
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